Tuesday, August 4, 2009

the futures uncertain



just gotta fit in the date which is TBA ATM

6 comments:

JFAStudios said...

Pretty good, Ciro. Did you use the pencil tool for the 2 human figure's outline?

Ciro W Romero said...

thanks, thats a custom brush not the pencil tool. i just noticed the 165st typo - sounds funny when u say it out loud. should be 165th tho:P

BuTTerS said...

idk why but the logo bothers me, maybe it's the placement or size or both... if you tried placing it elsewhere n that was the best spot then disregard that comment..

i dig the angle but not 45 degrees... how about the illustration is horizontal and the graphic elements are 45 degrees??

the hosted by part, there's nothing wrong with it but maybe you should make REBEL DIAZ bigger rather than the same size coz thas more important...

i hate using the @ symbol rather than AT but thats juss a preference...

and AVE. could be spelled out rather than abbreviated... it just looks better... but thats a preference too...

i can't really comment on the illutration since its WIP, but i REALLY hope that shade of yellow isn't used in the final... its icky...

but i think it's a good start... lol, nice job =)

Ciro W Romero said...

i think that has to be the most constructive comment i've ever gotten on any blog. thanks butters! I'll post a finish prob. tonight.

RedFireManiac said...

Wow, that sure came a long nicely. Much improved from the first version you posted. Good job, man.

BuTTerS said...

nice... looks alot cleaner... and you recycled the BG, lol... but the guy in the foreground his left arm (our right) bothers me, maybe coz theres a tangent goin on with the contours...

you should prolly put in a fake date for the meantime juss in case or something... =) kool aide!!